Life piece of punk is clever!
life bad, sort well good
mean as may seem, nice
life humorous monks and despair
Sweet is the life bitter
like a flip rolling coin
in one's favour or against
faithful, hopeful, and fruitful indeed
Sincere is life no doubt
seem ugly yet beautiful
jealousy as one bad seed transpires
good friendship trust betrayes
Dishonest honest heart
allow be lewd deceives
doom spelt upon head
but how ever ways appears
mean well unto those stand fast
the ways of life is best portrayed in the last stanza of the poem, 'Dishonest honest heart ', , i lov this line, thanx
A good start with a nice poem, Ndimele. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
sort of see-saw...back n forth words yet giving out a message to stand fast no mattr what....
mean well unto those stand fast.. nice words...10 life cruel but delivers well.... mehta
cryptic yet understandable. there are a lot of good lines in this poem. although not straight forward for the proper english writers but, then again life is not straight forward is it! nicely done
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice work but needs editing in grammar p'haps.d masters ll tell. 7 marks