The Wedding Call Poem by Benjamin Chiu Uy

The Wedding Call

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The Wedding Call

the summer sun,
realignes a call with the coming of age,

a lesson from the birds and the bees, the flower and the trees.

Astrue as Adam and Eve's knownledge of the red apple and the evil temptations.

a transition of awareness,
from a mothers wombare predicted to be the sons and the daughters.

A young man catching a young girl's eyes anda hand in marriage.

and in any walks of life,

the quicken pulse and haste
when allbecomes fair in love and the battle for the hearts

and the roses bloom in the summer gardens,
Or rots in the wiltsof disappointments.

all would be heroes rescuing his beloved princess.

all trumpets in the air calls for the chase,
praised this epoch in life's love chords,

The seasons for the wedding feasts.
And life journeys into the future.


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 19 July 2018

Good effort. Try to read more poem to improve your style.++10

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 July 2018

s Adam and Eve's knownledge of the red apple and the evil temptations. a transition of awareness, from a mothers wombare predicted to be the sons and the daughters. A young man catching a young girl's eyes anda hand in marriage... fine poem full of desire and its worthy expressions. dear poet. tony

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Benjamin Uy 18 July 2018

thank you for these encouraging words, as poets we aspire for the best lines for our poems. l am sure you know the sentinments being yourself a great poet at your bests of times

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Gajanan Mishra 18 July 2018

in the summer garden, good write

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