Mystic Indian

karaikal, Pondicherry State, India presently living in Madras, Tamilnadu State, India
Mystic Indian
karaikal, Pondicherry State, India presently living in Madras, Tamilnadu State, India
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The Wild Bees

Rating: 5.0

TO BEE:

'Tis dawn as the warmth of the sun embraces every being on earth;
As high up on the branches of the butter fruit tree –
there thrives a golden hive,
That’s camouflaged amongst the green fruits and the thicket of leaves.
The warmth of the sun’s splendor spreads into the hive -into every cell and chamber,
As the hive glows and sparkles in strange hues of golden light and amber.
Like the first fruit to ripen fast into a deep golden yellow;
drippin a stray dropp of honey onto the ground –

leaving them ants drunk and mellow.
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Obinna Eruchie 26 September 2009

This lovely lyrical poem on 'The Wild Bees' comes with beautiful imagery. Imaginative.

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Shreya Chatterjee 18 September 2009

you kind of remind me of kamala das's poems, the one about summer...you just reminded me of my school days friend... take care

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Shreya Chatterjee 18 September 2009

simply mesmerizing....m looking forward to more such expressions from ur side...creativity comes to its best when u make way for it to see the light of the day...waiting for more poems to be born... with best wishes shreya www.wanderer-of-the-world.blogspot.com

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 September 2009

This is an amazing piece of work. The complete cycle of life Well written poem. Thanks for sharing with me

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there is a poet in me! 02 September 2009

wow... awesome work.... so beautiful.. truly a lovely write... a 10+++

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Chitra - 01 September 2009

a dynamic write on the ever changing life cycle....resonating images

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Anjali Sinha 24 August 2009

OMG! ! ! what a tryst with life a complete circle awesome and rich in text ill give you a tenner anjali

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Patrick A. Martin 24 August 2009

The complete cycle brillant

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Joycee Dimple 11 August 2009

This is an amazing piece of work that has got all the elements of life, the dance, the flight, the love..is one's life ever complete without these emotions? It's an adept poet's proficent craft. You have created a brilliant world of bees with an entourage of elegant nature and it's wild beauty...we continue to see the best of your works...each time a surprise package..completely different in dimension and expression from your previous works...

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