Mystic Indian

karaikal, Pondicherry State, India presently living in Madras, Tamilnadu State, India
Mystic Indian
karaikal, Pondicherry State, India presently living in Madras, Tamilnadu State, India
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Excuse Me, Ms.God?

Rating: 4.6
Are you in the lightness of feathers
Or the wind that makes them dance?
Are you in the wings of the birds of flight...
Or the wind or water that helps them glide?

Are you in the fire behind every desire...
Or in the will that never ends it?
Are you in the passion of every want..
Or in the prayer petition that feeds your passion to fulfil?
Are you in there in the written words...
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Obinna Eruchie 26 September 2009
Questions about God's presence. Beautiful.
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Rahul Sharma 14 September 2009
GREAT WORK................KEEP IT UP! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Ravi Sathasivam 06 September 2009
Amazing. Beautifully written Well penned Enjoyed reading it.
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Mubeen Sadhika 03 September 2009
Its a good narration. Nice to see the composition.10+
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there is a poet in me! 02 September 2009
profound...the stanzas r linked nicely....keep up the goodwork :)
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Chitra - 01 September 2009
a thought provoking poem, layered with profound questions...
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Santhi Krishnan 24 August 2009
Still the quest prevails..but I know where to find you nowhere but here in your words. very well written...
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Mary Sanchez 18 August 2009
Very well thought out, I hope you can answer your own questions. you simply did not leave anything to chance. Did you? What an interesting and a bit overwhelming production. I liked it!
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Maya Hershey 17 August 2009
excellent.. brilliant.. i must say i have been overwhelmed... breathtaking poetry... perfect job 10++
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'...Or the after-thought of the next octave? ...' Simply … Well words baffle me. But as reader something to be said, ‘Nothing remained unaddressed’ More such we’re looking to read from you and Ten+++ Regards, dr. sakti 12.08.09.
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