The Wire Poem by Something Special

The Wire



this a ghazal I had to write. Please tell me what you think of it.

Behind metal chains, lock, and wire,
I must escape; it’s down to the wire.

The bird that once flew through the air
Now rests his feet upon a wire.

If one wants to get love back that has been lost,
One must be willing to go through the wire.

When I open my closet to hang up my dress,
I see empty hangers, both plastic and wire.

The silver wire hugs her bruised and bleeding wrists.
She begs her holder to free her from the wire.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 20 April 2009

emotion at its finest.. greatly displayed my friend.. u amazing

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