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' The Word In My Poem '

Rating: 2.9

I was searching a word
That escaped from
my poem,

At last I found
That in the terrace,
When it was sitting
with children and
Staring at your lips
at the time

of your tuition class
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 30 January 2010

Very modest way of love....exciting

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Very creative my friend.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 26 January 2010

Crafty and meaningful.10+++

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Shamik Kumar Bose 26 January 2010

Cool stuff. The last 2lines are sweet. Eloped and lips.. good thought. Carry on.

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Landsley Alexandre 26 December 2010

I like it it's like a hot line! ! !

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Louis Rams 03 August 2010

the lips are not only for speech, but for a soft gentle kiss, which your heart did miss.

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 February 2010

very nice one... really nice 10++ Maia

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Ken E Hall 04 February 2010

The word on her lips eloped with your love original++++10 regards

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The panda That loves 02 February 2010

I like your poem. it is a love poem. it is a 10 out of 10.

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