Their Conversations And Monologues Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Their Conversations And Monologues

Rating: 5.0


Along the earthen pavement by the side of the lake
Walks some absent minded souls;
Some self absorbed,
Some hand in hand with soulmates,
Some, just aspiring poets to be, fascinated by
Whatever the nature around them has to offer.

As they walk, they talk
To themselves or to each other.
To their soft conversations listen
The placid pool,
The mute lamp posts,
The deciduous trees and the fallen leaves.

To comfort their tired legs and waist,
Some empty benches wait eagerly.
Even the birds on the trees stop their own songs
And listen to these conversations and monologues.

Dhaka
22 June 2018
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Photo Credit: Ela Salahuddin

Their Conversations And Monologues
Thursday, June 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
These words came to my mind when I looked at the picture, taken by a friend of mine, while visiting Europe in the recent past.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 23 June 2018

An interesting write both insightful and there is sometimes wonder in silence great work. Thank you for your kind review of yesterday on my poem Prodigal Son? appreciated but back to your endeavour a 10 +++ I would say

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Khairul Ahsan 23 June 2018

@Paul Brookes, Thank you, dear poet, for being the first reader to comment on this poem. Your appreciation will inspire me to write better poetry. Thanks for your generous rating of my poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 June 2018

nice scenario no different to Canada in winter of one's life nice poetry yes tis it is have u read my moms smiles and mothersday today if not please do you may today

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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2018

Thanks for your comment, @The Poet Poet. I haven't read your poem 'Mom's Smiles' but i have read 'The Greatest Hindi Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir' and commented on it.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 June 2018

I see below u have said u want to compose better poetry then two suggestions read more poety comment on as many and the EDIT this ENGLISH IS not your mother tongue so it seems

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Khairul Ahsan 27 August 2020

@Valsa George, You have perfectly described the theme of the poem. Much inspired by your thoughtful comment, thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 August 2020

@Lyn Paul, Thanks for reading the poem and sharing your thoughts on it. Much inspired.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

@Hazel Durham, Thank you so much fo picking up my humble poem to your 'favourite poems' list! Appreciate your kind and generous comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

@Aarzoo Mehek, Thanks for the thoughtful appreciation. Much inspired by the comment. I also appreciate the kind comments that you left on some of my other poems recently.

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Valsa George 21 July 2018

In the evening of life, such places are sought after by people who don't have much responsibilities at hand and who come out to have a fresh breath of air. Also to meet birds of a feather and exchange some pleasantries! You have created a beautiful and pleasant ambiance!

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