Thursday, September 11, 2008

Then He Nakedness Has Deeply Sighed... Comments

Rating: 5.0

He stripped off his tight clothes –
The clothes put on him
In his childhood…
They tried to drum into his head:
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Janri Gogeshvili
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Waqas Naeem 14 January 2009

I'm all praise...This is such a wonderfully expressive piece! It breathes in the scent of freedom and rebellion... brilliant write! straight 10 for you...

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John Tiong Chunghoo 22 September 2008

yes, sometimes, we just love to be bare. it can be the best to happen like when we were born. great poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 September 2008

Naked truth stripping out hypocrisy, clad- in- false...excellent mystic write, Janri...ten for your poem

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Joseph Poewhit 11 September 2008

Those two last lines come across really great

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