There is nothing wrong
If you kiss me in the day
That will be your love
That for long you wish to display
There is nothing wrong
If we two stay together
Like two bodies with a
Soul our love will be strong forever
There is nothing wrong
If hand in hand we walk
Under the shadow of trees
Only of love and peace we will talk
There is nothing wrong
If we take vow and wed
Our love is pure and true
Between us for sure it will not fade
There is nothing wrong
Side by side if we sleep
When our time is over
With flowers we will be buried deep
I must admit you are absolutely right the words you fill in this poem. There IS Nothing Wrong. Just do it. You have enlightened your heart' s desires in five stanzas. Marvelous poem, Anil. You are truly a poet to my heart, just write what you think. It is your right. Thank you for sharing this gorgeous poem. God's Blessings.
Love over wins all things. Love enables us not to be shy nor be ashamed showing those feelings and emotions in public. BUT in Asian countries like where I was born, we do not kiss openly in public and especially never during day-time, even he is my lover. When I first came to the NL, I was shocked since the youth were kissing and embracing each other in almost every corner of the street. Western persons are accustomed to do that.10
That is a great compliment for a small poet like me Sylvia. Thanks very much and my heartfelt gratitude.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If we take vow and wed! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! SAD FOR ME TIPU JI WE R BOTH ALIKE NONE GAY HOPEFULLY WEST IS OVERFLOWING WHAT ABOUT YOUR COUNTREE