Mia Car


Theresa - Poem by Mia Car

To the moon and stars you take me
When i see your smile, so lovely
You light up as mellow as the moonlight
And as promising as day

How you make my heart skip a beat
I'll never know
As you've held captive, my mind and soul
I'm a prisoner of your beautiful eyes
Yet i feel like i can fly, as if to touch the sky

Every ounce of me
Adores every piece of you
Like how the flowers own the bees
All my senses, drawn to you

Risking it all
Can't tell this heart not to fall
Embraced both mess and reality
Unencumbered by uncertainty

Everything in my life seems to fit
The moment you walked into it
It's as if you're the right kind of wrong
To you, this heart wants to belong

Say it to me, quite clearly
It's impossible, you and me
Say it again a couple more times
And i will love you a thousand times

Always remember these last few lines
I love you, beyond words, it knows no time
I will be waiting til your path crosses mine
I'll be secretly hoping til my heart says good night

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship, love, sad love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A poem I wrote for someone I so deeply adore and truly love, Theresa.

Comments about Theresa by Mia Car

  • (12/13/2015 9:07:00 PM)


    maganda nakakaaliw damdamin..salamat po (Report) Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (12/8/2015 5:43:00 PM)


    Beautiful depiction of voyage of bliss and spiritual experience that is love, well articulated and subtly penned in poetic diction with good rhyme scheme. A Thing Of Beauty Is A Joy For Ever - John Keats. Lovely romantic poem nicely written from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Mia. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/30/2015 1:50:00 PM)


    Love can carry one away. Thanks, Mia (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/30/2015 9:19:00 AM)


    Every ounce of me
    Adores every piece of you
    Like how the flowers own the bees
    All my senses, drawn to you- - Wonderful expressions of love, your heartfelt passions are well presented in the poem, thanks
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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