Monday, November 30, 2015

Theresa Comments

Rating: 4.5

To the moon and stars you take me
When i see your smile, so lovely
You light up as mellow as the moonlight
And as promising as day
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Manonton Dalan 13 December 2015

maganda nakakaaliw damdamin..salamat po

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Chinedu Dike 08 December 2015

Beautiful depiction of voyage of bliss and spiritual experience that is love, well articulated and subtly penned in poetic diction with good rhyme scheme. A Thing Of Beauty Is A Joy For Ever - John Keats. Lovely romantic poem nicely written from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Mia. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 30 November 2015

Love can carry one away. Thanks, Mia

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Shakil Ahmed 30 November 2015

Every ounce of me Adores every piece of you Like how the flowers own the bees All my senses, drawn to you- - Wonderful expressions of love, your heartfelt passions are well presented in the poem, thanks

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