In this early morning hour, these stars are just amazing
Floating freely in the blue sky,
like some careless ships of Light in sleeping blue
Gentle soft in their eyes,
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Wow, Shamik, this is truly great, I like it. What a nice composing of words and your way in writing. Especially your idea, you're right, these stars are just amazing
Shamik, This poem is amazing too. Such picturesque descriptions of the sky with all the jewels and a few are shy. This really touched my heart. The second stanza on first love is all wonderful too as I know most people never forget their first love. A gift indeed for life. 10 love Karin
This is really a beautiful poem, Shamik, full of wonderful imagery and similes. The title is very spontaneous and reflects the amazing truth of universe...10/10. Regards Naseer
In this poem you have very nicely immortalised the memories of 'first love'! 10! You may feel amused when I tell you that when I tried to recall about first love, - there were a few, but all were infatuations now I find, looking back with hindsight! -Raj