' They 'for' He 'and' She ' Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

' They 'for' He 'and' She '

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'them' for 'him' and 'her'
'their' for 'his' and 'her'

To stop a reader in their tracks,
to make them think,
well, to suggest that they do (does) ,
to give them the opportunity to,

in the same verse as the famous cliche,
'The best laid schemes o' mice an' men'*,
Robert Burns rhymes 'joy' with 'a-gley',
which looks like
it should rhyme with what it means in English -
looks like it should rhyme with 'astray'.

Elsewhere**, he rhymes 'joy' with 'ply'.

A poet fine,
he detested 'all sadness and spleen'.

' They 'for' He 'and' She '
Tuesday, August 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: equality,language,political,rhyme,robert burns
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
* 'To a mouse, on turning her up in her nest with the plough, November,1785'
** 'The Whistle'

'cliche' with an accent over the 'e' and rhyming with 'a-gley'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 07 August 2018

Rightly said- ... looks like it should rhyme with 'astray'. ....... A poet fine, he detested 'all sadness and spleen'.

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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