They Melt With All The Gods Poem by Altair Laahad

They Melt With All The Gods

Rating: 4.3


He wrapped her within his soft breath
that flowed like winds
from a remote paradise

while she tucked him in her bed of roses
where dunes of warmth act
like a fire crafted in the midway
between the kingdom of heaven
and the realm of the hells
conceived to defrost the coolest
and stubbornest iceberg

There, a bird falls from the sky
into the pink flower
that blossoms as a butterfly
fluttering to reach the zenith;
they swirl and twirl and dance
and melt with all the gods

In the meanwhile,
a volcano of pleasure erupts
and disrupts the vision of the earth citizens
who remain behind blind
screens of fear

Sunday, May 12, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: volcano,butterfly,pink
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this was written after reading 'last gods' by Galway Kinnel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 14 May 2013

Hello Poet, i have to search the Last Gods, I dont knew neither the author nor the poem. But your Poem follows the same secret, nature and man, love and sensuality, so subtly described. Very hot! Loved it!

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nice poem, very powerful and sentimental.

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