They Were Something Else Poem by Akhtar Jawad

They Were Something Else

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I am so much obstinate,
And I am so much absurd,
Often I break the mirror,
In it I look an ugly turd,

When my pen becomes a slang,
I break it, its pieces I throw,
Wish I could cut my throat,
Whenever I sound like a crow!

I confess I am an obnoxious,
And sure, I'm too despicable,
Wish I could change myself,
Admit I'm no more capable.

I dream to change the world,
Me! Simply a bad bare kelse,
Men who changed the world,
Were really something else.

Saturday, December 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: great leaders
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(As computer objected on 'kelse' I explain it, though my readers are learned but a few may not understand it. 'Me! simply a bad bare kelse', I mean a nation who is drunk in his foolish beliefs and claims that his beliefs(I mean various isms not a religion) are the best possible way of reforms.

Kelse means the act of gurning while drunk.
Also someone with a strong stench of turd
My jaw hurts I was bare kelse last night.

gurn
verb
gerund or present participle: gurning
1.
BRITISH
pull a grotesque face.
2.
SCOTTISHIRISH
complain peevishly.)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 December 2016

you continue to be remarkable Poetree Janabh ji

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Valsa George 10 December 2016

Why do you underrate yourself ! You are a smart 'youngster' in your late sixties- capable, imaginative and manly!

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