A Great Poetess Poem by Akhtar Jawad
A Great Poetess
Admired and enjoyed,
As a guide I deployed,
Messages I found,
In her poems so profound,
Her messages of ethics,
Her sense of civics,
A true loving heart,
In the battle with thwart!
Always wins the wars,
She's Venus in stars,
A candle although old,
But her flame is gold,
A beacon on the shore,
Guess her and adore,
You know her well,
A melodious bell!
When my brain is tired,
I am not admired,
Inspiration I need,
Then my childish greed,
Looks her for a feed,
And a flower I read,
Fragrance of her flower,
Is an inspiring shower!
Should I take her name?
Watch the Hall of Fame,
Pick your lovely choice,
And listen to the voice,
Of the lady with grace,
What a smiling face!
Or remain in suspense,
I am too much dense!
My Dear Friend, your guess is wrong,
No more teasing, now I don't prolong,
Her love children you see every night,
And in the sun you see her light,
Her love children are the beautiful flowers,
Her love children are the pleasant showers,
Her favorite child is the beautiful moon,
She believes in love and love is a boon.
A Fantastic dedication to immortal poetess.... With captivating lines..... Always wins the wars, She's Venus in stars, A candle although old, But her flame is gold, A beacon on the shore, Guess her and adore, .....These words left me guessing who could be the great poetess. But the next line... My Dear Friend, your guess is wrong...... Lovely write that captivate the attention of readers from begining till end. Loved the way you portrayed a character.....
A magnificent read, a most pleasurable treat and through my being fond of poems created with much care and love, finally I open PH again to read your most beautiful poem about A Great Immortal Poetess, and guess WHO is she? I let her be as Mysterious as you have created her, Mysteries are still the best options to keep, Akhtar! My grandest appreciations and respect for you and your most beautiful poem. A 10+++++++ for the Vote.
I have read and reread again your amazing poem. One GREAT mistake I ever did here ro have called you only AKHTAR it should be AKHTAR Sir. Atill a most beautiful poem, Akhtar Sir. I have enjoyed very much. Than you so much for having created this. God's Blessings In Abundance.
A Classic Poem of beauty and rhythmic splendour. Top stars. I take this opportunity to wish you a wonderful 2021, dear Akhtar Sahab!
Her love children are the beautiful flowers, Her love children are the pleasant showers, Her favorite child is the beautiful moon.... // Absolutely fascinating. It reflects the esteemed place that we have in our hearts for women who are composing top class poetry.
This is really beautiful poem for the poetess do well sdmired and placed.
The last six lines are impressing, Sir! I cite them here: Her love children you see every night, And in the sun you see her light, Her love children are the beautiful flowers, Her love children are the pleasant showers, Her favorite child is the beautiful moon, She believes in love and love is a boon...............Truly Great Poetess is Nature herself. Well captured and loveliest worded. Such a beautiful poem. Love rereading this. Thank you for sharing, Akhtar Sir!
This magnificent piece of poetry compels a reader to read it time and again sir! Work of art! !
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This is simply beautiful.... Sweetly rhyming and a wonderful tribute to a great poetess ! ! Should I take her name? Watch the Hall of Fame, Pick your lovely choice, And listen to the voice, Of the lady with grace, What a smiling face! With these wonderful lines, you have immortalised her! This deserves full marks Akhatarji