Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 495,278 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

They Win - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I simply blinked to write
With so much feeling of delight
How a child gets happy!
I am indebted and grateful already

One of the comments by senior reader thrilled
My heart was really filled
The joy found its own place
I was found to be in chase

Yes poets are encouraged
When good comments are managed
The support comes from unknown quarter
The impact of it is realized there after

I am not known outside
But poems are read worldwide
I get astonished at tremendous welcome
It shall be called golden day sometimes

I pay my respect
To all those send
Their comments in
I lose they win

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/28/2015 4:37:00 AM)


    Hasmukh Mehta....... welcome Dharani Akil likes this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/28/2015 4:37:00 AM)


    Hasmukh Mehta welcome Dharani Akil likes this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/28/2015 3:10:00 AM)


    I simply blinked to write
    With so much feeling of delight
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 28, 2015



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