Thin Air Poem by Rob Lamberton

Thin Air

Rating: 5.0

I need mountain air
Rustle my leaves Blue sky
Forever and always
Will you write two lines my love
As far as the eye can see

Wednesday, February 21, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: leaves
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 February 2024

I can imagine this and it makes my heart sing TFS Bravo! ! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 February 2024

The two closure lines are great thoughts to ponder about.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 February 2024

Air is thinner when we are in the mountain top and the sky is just a stone's throw away. Nature can always make poems very interesting and wonderful. Great images!

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