Think To Miss Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Think To Miss

Rating: 4.5


I found divine light
That forced me to go for delight
With self introspection
And better human relation

What shall be removed first?
The mind argues at its best
The arrogance must be shed
The inner conscious must be read

Then came another strong voice
“Care for sentiments” there is no other choice
I thought seriously and felt some elevation
This was real response for strong relation

What about these lies?
Mind revolted with firm belief
Yes some truth must prevail
Else mission of life may fail

What about double standard?
I had no hesitation with word
Yes it should opt for simplicity
One must fear dictates from almighty

What about peace and harmony?
It looked so much phony
People want no more respite
They will fight on without any right

I thought for self first
I shall think to start
Feel sincerely as its part
But never think to miss it or depart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2014

I found divine light That forced me to go for delight

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2014

:) Ashley S4 minutes ago very thoughtful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2014

Good introspection Aparna3 minutes ago It speaks about your inner turmoil once you go through a cycle of introspection! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2014

Nice Poem! Alex Tea1 minute ago I like this a lot. One bit of constructive criticism for you: some rhyming pairs felt a little off in rhythm to me, like the first two lines of the third verse. That aside, really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Hasmukh Mehta wwelcome 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2014

Wow Jessica SikoraLess than a minute ago Absolutely beautiful, love this! nicely done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2014

Good rhyme technique David Callahan Sr.1 minute ago Awesome imagery

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2014

astonishing Leonardo Freemando4 minutes ago wow very enlightening in itself

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2014

Good Susan Jordan5 minutes ago It is awesome like to see more from you Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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