Think To Miss Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Think To Miss
I found divine light
That forced me to go for delight
With self introspection
And better human relation
What shall be removed first?
The mind argues at its best
The arrogance must be shed
The inner conscious must be read
Then came another strong voice
“Care for sentiments” there is no other choice
I thought seriously and felt some elevation
This was real response for strong relation
What about these lies?
Mind revolted with firm belief
Yes some truth must prevail
Else mission of life may fail
What about double standard?
I had no hesitation with word
Yes it should opt for simplicity
One must fear dictates from almighty
What about peace and harmony?
It looked so much phony
People want no more respite
They will fight on without any right
I thought for self first
I shall think to start
Feel sincerely as its part
But never think to miss it or depart
Good introspection Aparna3 minutes ago It speaks about your inner turmoil once you go through a cycle of introspection! Comment +1
Nice Poem! Alex Tea1 minute ago I like this a lot. One bit of constructive criticism for you: some rhyming pairs felt a little off in rhythm to me, like the first two lines of the third verse. That aside, really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing
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Wow Jessica SikoraLess than a minute ago Absolutely beautiful, love this! nicely done
Good rhyme technique David Callahan Sr.1 minute ago Awesome imagery
astonishing Leonardo Freemando4 minutes ago wow very enlightening in itself
Good Susan Jordan5 minutes ago It is awesome like to see more from you Comment +1
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I found divine light That forced me to go for delight