Thinking Of You Poem by Hannah Davies
Thinking Of You
You popped into my head today
Whilst I was innocently looking the other way.
It was only for a minute or two
I don't know what made me think of you.
Once again I feel you there
Your eyes burning through me with that evil stare.
What a stupid thing to do
Can't believe I caught myself thinking of you.
I hear your voice, cold as ice
Like a knife to the heart, it continues to slice.
A moment of weakness I went through
It must have been to even think of you.
A violent touch from your hand
No reason behind it, I will never understand.
It doesn't matter what I do
I still find myslef thinking of you.
Is it normal? I'm not sure
I can't keep going round in circles any more.
Keep my brain focused on other things to do
So I won't even have time to think of you.
very nice poem...well written....sorry to hear if these words are true....that anybody would raise their hand to you. this i will never understand...to raise a hand in anger to a woman from a man. Brian
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 10:37:15 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I really liked the first several stanzas. The rhyme and repetition were deceptively simple, as the poem progressed I realized it was not just a sing-songy thing your were writing, not a greeting card, but something about a complex, painful situation. I found that worthy of a poem. The last couple stanzas didn't have quite the impact for me, though I'm not sure what to suggest, to strengthen them.