Thirst Poem by Jaxsun Castro Horn

Thirst

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On a warming June,
the twins are still at play.
So many degrees past noon,
she wish to frolic the water as they.

A voice looms amongst the trees,
under blue fabric of white squares.
She summons an instant breeze,
to the casted shadows of her green hair.

She cues the finches to sing,
soothing and easily.
Softly, “I’ve waited, wondering
of whom will visit me.'

''Find refuge here on my silent land.
Whisper me all your burdens.
My breath will assoil your hands
and bury them in this garden.''

''Come closer and touch me.
I am too thirsty to cry.
Lay your brow upon mine gently,
and let it rain before July.''

When the lion appears,
water is scarce once more.
The twins are gone from here,
gone to a faraway shore.

Sometimes her friends come and go,
but the tree remain rooted in staid.
If her thirst returns tomorrow,
she'll remember the tears they gave.

Thirst
Thursday, September 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,children,cry,friendship,lion,nature,summer,thanks,tree,twins
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 September 2015

The poem is a very good depiction of the inserted picture. A lovely poem nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Jaxsun.

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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

Very vivid imagery, rhythm and emotional intensity displayed within your poem. When the lion appears, water is scarce once more, emanates a picture of Africa within my mind, the animals hoping for rain to come soon to appease their thirst. Excellent and picturesque, a unique portrait of nature. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Joel Horne 03 September 2015

You're welcome. I appreciate your kinds words.

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Kelly Kurt 03 September 2015

A wonderful poem, Jaxsun

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Joel Horne 03 September 2015

Thank you Kelly.

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Jaxsun Castro Horn

Jaxsun Castro Horn

Lincoln Nebraska
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