Thirsty Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Thirsty

Rating: 4.8


I am just immersed in a pond
River is my solicitude
Ocean is my dream
Unto which wonderful fathom
I would love to dive
Deep and die happily

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 August 2019

Six wonderful lines that capture desire... A thirst for something that we usually cannot obtain in life. Powerful and thought provoking write. Well penned.

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Many many thanks Rose.......I am humbled

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Rajnish Manga 28 July 2019

Simply brilliant. Beauty and brevity celebrating the joy of being oneself. Thanks.

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Many many thanks Rajnishji....I am truly humbled

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