Monday, January 3, 2005

Thirty-Eight C Comments

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God, will you help me just today?

I am confronted by a velvet skinned young maiden.
Or should I say presented with her by the grace of...YOU?
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Sandra Osborne 03 January 2005

Great. just simply damned great, exactly perfect. You are the man! ;)

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Rich Hanson 03 January 2005

A fun poem. I envy you both the poem and the experience.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 03 January 2005

Poetry hound, while I do know the odd religious guy and girl, please do not count me among them. I have a reputation to guard. I may use religious fervor in certain pursuits but look down upon organised and disorganised religion as a man-made morass so full of those substances that ought to be residing in society's sewers....... I do believe in the existence of Gods simply because there is no way that devils could have made woman. H

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 03 January 2005

Any poem from you about a woman is always enjoyable.Thank you.

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Poetry Hound 03 January 2005

Really enjoyed this one, and you didn't even use the word 'temptation' in it! And here I thought you religious guys tried to restrain yourselves on matters of the proverbial pleasures of the flesh.

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