You said that or I thought you said that
Or was it you said this and not that
I thought I'd figured it out but that wasn't it
Then what was it if it wasn't this or that
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Illustrative of a major problem throughout time; lack of communication
Thank you...you are much nicer than the New Yorker magazine was to me...they completely rejected it! (smile)
Just wow. I think pretty much everyone can relate to it. This poem has a unique rhythm and tone. Thanks for sharing.
COOOOOOL MAN and that is how I feel granted there are much better poets than I and really much jazz poems also...I am listening to Lisa Ono-Pretty World as I read your comment you gladden my heart man! Pls send me your poetry also! Cheers
A highly relatable piece depicting communication gap in relationships, well articulated and nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Chip.
It was inspired by the blessed jazz musik i listen to man!