Tuesday, December 5, 2006

This Christmas Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just once before I die I would
so love to see a lot of smiling faces,
each morning when I board the city bus.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Ernestine Northover 05 December 2006

Thoughtful and charming poem Herbert, I love the last two lines, they are priceless. Thoroughly enjoying your work. Keep up the good writes. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Danny Reynolds 05 December 2006

H, is the 'Salt and Pepper' suit just for delivering the season's greetings? If so, give my condiments to your tailor. Danny ; ¬)

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Gina Onyemaechi 05 December 2006

Sadness and humour well married together, here. Love the finish: '...wrapped like a Christmas gift from God / inside my salt and pepper London-tailored suit' - colourful allusions.

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