This Fire Poem by Nick Jordan

This Fire

Rating: 5.0


A spark,
and a blaze lights up the night.
A small glow in the dark,
quickly growing in height.
Throwing rays of flame,
blowing black smoke.
A blanket of shame,
a hazy grim cloak.

But the flames flick higher,
the flares flash brighter.
No common fire,
this torch is a fighter.
It will scorch, it will burn,
it will rise ever higher.
Until ash it is turned,
and the fire retires.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brenda Arroyo 25 March 2010

Brilliant Write! The flow of it is wonderful.

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Krista Spears 27 January 2010

i like this one a lot nickers! ! !

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Powerful progression my friend.

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