This Life Is Like A Dew Drop Comments

i watch the life hanging onto the silently passing time melting away like a dew drop without a soothing rhyme awsome imagery.Comparing the hanging dew drops to the ephimeral life is outstanding....10

That's a lovely portrait of nature with morning dew in the centre stage. And the dew lives up to its analogy with melting nature of time. Thanks, Anil ji.

The title, 'This Life Is Like A Dew Drop', is a beautiful metaphor. The verses rhyme well, and if I may suggest, if you edit the last word of the second stanza and make it 'reappear' instead of just 'appear', it would rhyme better, and be more meaningful too.