This Life Is Like A Dew Drop Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

This Life Is Like A Dew Drop

Rating: 4.5


i watch the dew drops hanging
onto the blades of grass
dancing, sparkling and slipping
like tiny bulbs of glass

i watch the dew drops falling
down and slowly disappear
without a noise and wetting the
ground not again to appear

i watch the life hanging onto
the silently passing time
melting away like a dew drop
without a soothing rhyme

Sunday, August 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i watch the life hanging onto the silently passing time melting away like a dew drop without a soothing rhyme awsome imagery.Comparing the hanging dew drops to the ephimeral life is outstanding....10

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Rajnish Manga 16 August 2020

That's a lovely portrait of nature with morning dew in the centre stage. And the dew lives up to its analogy with melting nature of time. Thanks, Anil ji.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 August 2020

The title, 'This Life Is Like A Dew Drop', is a beautiful metaphor. The verses rhyme well, and if I may suggest, if you edit the last word of the second stanza and make it 'reappear' instead of just 'appear', it would rhyme better, and be more meaningful too.

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