This Moment! Poem by Nithya Balachandran

This Moment!

Rating: 5.0


.A bright orb of hope winks

and reassures

'Next moment is going to be

the awesomest! '

but, who knows?

.

A black hole of death smirks

and warns

'Another moment may not come! '

but, who knows?

.

The clock on the wall chuckles

and says

.

'This moment is all yours.

Live it or just brood.'

This Moment!
Saturday, December 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death,hope,moment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2015

Realizing present moment is fantastic. Another moment may not come. Very wisely drafted and shared.10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 December 2015

Unpredictability about future generates hopes for celestial gains in future and works as a spice of life. It is, thus, better not to know so many things for sure. Any way, it is my opinion. A nice poem. Meaningful and realistic. Enjoyed reading.10+

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