This Temple Poem by Francie Lynch

This Temple

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I heard a voice
call out:

"Are you home? "

(perhaps it came
from within)

A stranger's voice
that's called
before.

I am
insular.

"I am Home! "

Inside

This temple of dissipation.

Saturday, October 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction,alcoholism,alienation,drinking,isolation,self control,self discovery,self help
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 26 October 2019

A voice from within - inspiration or intoxication. Beautiful. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments. Kingsley Egbukole

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 October 2019

I like how you use the temple for metaphor in this fine awesome poem. The voice from within calls us yes. Kudos. Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too titled, ' smart phones and smart cars...."

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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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