How should I celebrate, this valentine?
In this mass-produced city of mine,
Where nothing can be defined peculiar,
Though of very delicate design…
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Pretty parcels, they blink and wink,
To everyone who passes or looks back.
"Love makes the world go", I hear say,
Who would resist love, on this rosy day?
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My words are shabby and frail on this Day,
And my pen doesn't write in its usual way.
I wish I could find things other than money
To convey to my beloved what I hope to say.
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Feb.14,2011.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
defined singular? ? I do not understand its meaning. i'll bet you DO HAVE something better than MONEY! ! ! I LIKE the rhyming. to MyPoemList. i'd type: Love makes the world go 'round, they say. bri :)
1) How about the word peculiar? Just replaced it...2) Money makes the mare go. is what i had in mind at the time of writing...so i chose to drop the word round...Thank you for pointing it out and I will sure rethink about it :) 3) I feel much honored that you like the poem, a big encouragement that is. -Perdita