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This Valentine's

Rating: 5.0

This comes to you my valentine
I am so glad that you are now mine
Though things are not yet in line
I know that together we will be fine

We have been waiting for this time
When we would look each other in the eye
But now that the time has come
Please girl let us not be shy

This relationship is about us
Not about what they say
So come here into my arms
And let us celebrate this Valentine’s Day

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Enita Watungwa 15 May 2014

beautiful poem. very sweet too.

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Chanda Mwenechanya 23 February 2011

good rhyming there and nice wok and keep writing

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Jenny Gordon 09 February 2011

Aw, very sweet! Delightful, a tad aggressive, but if you both have been awaiting this delightful time of looking into each other's eyes and being in each other's arms, I daresay, a bit of maidenly reserve on her part is only too enticing....I quite enjoyed this...your end-rhyming was great and your rythm fairly good as well. Very nice! ! !

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