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Rating: 5.0

In walking the road
We are too worried about pot holes
In every twist and turn we are looked anxious
But the thorns we keep
Within us the bad seeds we grow
Are callously overlooked
In the garden the way we clean weeds
With the same intensity and urgency
We need them to be removed.

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Nivedita Patnaik 23 October 2013

loved the poem...the choice of words are so very apt for the thought.

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Heather Wilkins 21 October 2013

weeds grow in every garden that is why we each need a good gardener excellent 10

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Nader Baheri 21 October 2013

superb.but every beauty has its own thorn~nb

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Marvin Brato 20 October 2013

Very true sentiment and wise thoughts!

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