>≫≫I Want To Die Poem by Abdul Wahab

>≫≫I Want To Die

Rating: 4.3

Heavenly cursed and heavily sinned I
No more i like to add them, so, I want to die
And I want to become a holy ghost
Whom the people would like the most.
Like the retreating soldiers I like to come back
To my own permanent and eternal home
You may call it a suicide or martyrdom.

In my real home I see the news
Coming from the lipstick coated lips
In the television of my molten death
People are sobbing with a heavy breath.
The atmosphere is heavy and they feel the pain
This thrills me and gives a feeling of gain.


The only son of my father
The only darling of my mother
Fainted repeatedly on the cushion
Peal like tear drops coming from my beloved son,
Friends and relatives express grief in the community hall,
All these excite me and I sought to say'' I love you all.''

For the first time in my life in my last ritual I listen
From those men that I was really a very very good man.
In such intense atmosphere of gloom and sad
My heart cheers and I become too much glad.















































































































































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>≫≫I Want To Die
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 06 December 2013

Well crafted, Dark Blanca Prior598 days ago Given the reality of the times this is a bit depressing, however I feel it brings light to the fact that individuals that commit suicide aren't aware of how much love and support they have because everyone waits until that person is dead to express their true emotions. Although very dark it calls to a positive realization... that you don't know what you have until you lose it.

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Wahab Abdul 16 July 2013

thank you Queeny Gona for your comment

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Wahab Abdul 06 December 2013

I love this! Regenna Hairston-Grier598 days ago This poem reminds me of my childhood in a segregated south, and the very day the carrier brought the news that my fathers oldest Son was killed in Vietnam.... Very well express!

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Wahab Abdul 06 December 2013

well wriiten Andrew Hozempa598 days ago this poem is well writen and I find I feel a heavy heart with reading it, but still feel a smile as you can sense his feelings in the words

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Wahab Abdul 06 December 2013

intense Dara Bruce598 days ago its almost as if you wrote this from beyond the grave, i can tell you do not fear death but welcom ite

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Besa Dede 01 October 2024

Sad but beautiful feelings expressed, through the eyes of those who suffer and feel that no one loves them. Depressed thoughts of suicide bring sadness, but this poem is well crafted with raw emotions. Thank you for sharing.

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Some Lad 23 May 2022

More like Abdul Needs Rehab...

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 29 November 2017

This poem is absolutely touching.... like it. Well articulated

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Maveriqué Richard 01 September 2016

A poem which moved my stream of emotions. Nicely written and reflects that hopeless times when one wishes death smiles at him.

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Marilyn Lott 17 August 2016

So much to think about in this poem. Sadness is my first thought because it is only in death that one feels the passion and love from others. The hope would be to feel that love and emotion during life for a peaceful existence. Yes, sad but written with such thought and emotion. A great write!

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