Thoughtful Ingredients Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak
Thoughtful Ingredients
Solace completely enclosing my soul with it's peaceful
serenity, closing all doors and windows against negative
tides, trying to gain access to inner thoughts.
Surrendering nothing of self, keeping freedom and total
independence, beautiful senses, forming blossoms of
thoughtful ingredients to generously form into poetry
for all time.
Circulating and taking ideas into formulas and equations
that no one has yet thought to figure out.
So all-encompassing, going into many dimensions of entertaining
beauty of imagination's landscapes where everything continually
manifests whatever in life that is wanted.
Having found a key to the universe, beginning to become the
person who will bring peaceful accommodations to the poor
and needy in this life of earthly mankind.
Nothing to stand in the way, loving how it all fits together
in one huge majestic puzzle, fitting perfectly, taking every-
thing and sharing it with the people of the world needing
it the most.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 9:51:09 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Hi Rose Ann, I have read about 5 of your poems and I must say, they tend to give a very peaceful feeling with a sort of healing energy and always seem to be positive I like reading them but I want to honestly say that they lack the flavor of poetic language and are very prosaic. I think if you employ some figurative devices to enhance rhythm and imagery that will help strengthen your poems. It was an honor and a pleasure reading them though and look forward to reading more. I sincerely hope that my comment does not upset you as I speak out of care and concern and you seem to be a very open-minded person who value honesty and sincerity.