tiyler durden

Thoughts - Poem by tiyler durden

from a sea of dreams
reality crashes through.
Through the whispering leaves
Autumn makes things new

From a road through the mind
Reality is the destination
in the back of my mind
I jump to it without hesitation

Like a wish that is blessed
yet ends up a disaster
I feel I am pressed
upon an unlucky star

Comments about Thoughts by tiyler durden

  • (1/5/2006 8:18:00 AM)

    tiyler durden, what a lovely dreamy feel, your poem has. I didn't think you had it in you, to be honest! lol I was a little unsure of the two minds in the 2nd stanza, they kind of holted the smooth flow a little. Thoroughly enjoyable, all the same. 9 from Tai, pickie today. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/5/2006 6:22:00 AM)

    Very nice Tiyler.........interesting thoughts. I hope your luck changes for you! sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • (1/5/2006 5:46:00 AM)

    Nice thought Tlyer dave (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 5, 2006

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