Dave's Upset Poem by tiyler durden

Dave's Upset

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Dave is upset
I wonder can I get
Him a nice cup of tea
To make him happy?

Nothing makes him smile
He has been like this for a while
What can I do
to make him stop feeling like poo?

I wish I could make him feel great
I wish I could open that gate!
But he stays in his cube
Full of doom and gloom

tiyler durden
Tuesday, January 3, 2006
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Ernestine Northover 03 January 2006

I think the cup of tea is a great idea, it's very soothing and gives one something to do! Nice little write, with a thoughtful sympathetic aim. Love Ernestine XXX

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A. B. 03 January 2006

Poor dave. Hope he cheers up. Peace.

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Liz Munro 03 January 2006

Love the metaphor of this poem. Poor Dave. Liz.

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Moya Levy 03 January 2006

Oh no! Poor Dave! ! Nice one Terry for making him smile! Moyax

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David Darbyshire 03 January 2006

I am Doomed Doomed THX Terry for putting a smile back on my sour puss..dave

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