Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,133 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Thoughts And Theme - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I feel startled and ashamed
When come across such thoughts and theme
Where poet expresses defeatist view
Venture into field and express which is not due

What loss world may suffer if you commit suicide?
How would you face people when unable to hide?
Think of futile bid you make and escape unhurt?
Let that energy be stored in corner and not revert

Why there is sea change in concept?
I have witnessed downward trend and wept
We are responsible for creating new world order
Create tension free world for people living across the borders

'The thing of beauty is joy for ever' still rings in ears
It has not changed its power and theme over the years
Love is eternal and may not change till the centuries
It may even create nice feelings in the heart of adversaries

Let us build new bridge over which people can move
Love each other and give no room for conduct to prove
It is heart burn topic and needs careful orientation
Love is to feel and to be felt with its sacred relation

I may go with all those who care least for cast and religion
Love can be no different across the borders or in any of the regions
Lovely and beautiful eyes may speak each and every word
Invite you to fall in love with eyes downwards and look forward

Let all the poets air their beautiful voice
With new concept and tall order promises
World has remained so much beautiful to live
Let us have faith in it and firmly believe

Even God has taken pride in taking birth
They had enjoyed the unbearable life with fear of death
It was only to create love with all possible means
Let us change the hearts and may certainly and possibly win


Comments about Thoughts And Theme by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2012 10:03:00 PM)


    Patricia Tate Ooh how beautiful?
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2012 10:31:00 PM)


    Re: Thoughts and theme (Score: 1)
    by nprimemin on Sunday, August 12,2012 (22: 27: 56)
    You are very inspiring. Your poem is a poet's signature. It is something that will be enjoyed by me when I don't feel like writing. So I will read it over and over again. You should do a part two.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2012 7:53:00 PM)


    Thoughts and theme

    I feel startled and ashamed
    When come across such thoughts and theme
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, August 13, 2012


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