M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,883 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Three Liners - We Remain - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Sweet as honey,
Sour as tamarind
Our relationship swings transversely.

High as sky,
Low as earth,
Our love flies between two of them.

Playful like river
Clam like sea
We both come to the terms after every tussle.

Night with dreams
Day with realities
We try to balance our life between day and night.

We say that we love each other unconditionally
Yet we fall for the materialistic world traditionally

Topic(s) of this poem: love, love and friendship, love and life

Form: Terza Rima


Comments about Three Liners - We Remain by M. Asim Nehal

  • (5/28/2016 6:11:00 AM)


    Magical poem. Great reading. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/8/2015 11:47:00 AM)


    Amusing and mind blowing poem. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/8/2015 9:59:00 AM)


    So contradictory yet expressing a beautiful union....
    We say that we love each other unconditionally
    Yet we fall for the materialistic world traditionally
    .... these two lines are my favourite. lovely poem...more than 10
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  • Rajnish Manga (9/8/2015 3:39:00 AM)


    I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem which speaks of a relationship nurtured by two sweethearts in the crucible of life's realities. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 8, 2015



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