M. Asim Nehal

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Three Stages Of Life........ - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

In childhood times we were carefree
knew nothing about life's mysteries
had lots of fun and ate sweet pastries
probably never thought to make history.

In our youth-ness
we wander everywhere ruthless
thinking that life has blessed us with power
to take control over everything to set us free

Now when we sit back and take account
of our life that how we spent on energy and time
Everything that has gone will never come again
whatever we do death will catch us in utter disdain.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Three Stages Of Life........ by M. Asim Nehal

  • Sonali Ganguly (5/13/2016 1:54:00 AM)

    every phase of life has its own gifts to mankind. half of it we make memories, next half recall them. (Report) Reply

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/9/2015 9:05:00 AM)

    Verily, man passes through these three phases
    where thoughts change with the change in emotions.
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  • Valsa George (9/9/2015 10:59:00 PM)

    Yes, man passes through three predominant stages...... Childhood when life is all fun, youth when life is all fire and old age when life is just smoke and a preparation for a long long journey! All the three stages are beautifully brought out! (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/15/2015 11:30:00 AM)

    Thx much, admire your poems and comments.

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/9/2015 1:31:00 AM)

    the state of mind of a human being in his three stages of life is expressed impressively. and the last line is so priceless. marvellous work. more than 10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/15/2015 11:29:00 AM)

    Thank u dear, I appreciate your reviews and comments....

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/8/2015 2:22:00 PM)

    So nicely envisioned and depicted the three stages of life. In spite of people knowing it they lead extravagant life. Death must catch our body but soul is eternal. So we must care for soul, we have something to do for it. A beautiful poem I like most. Thank you dear Asim for posting such a gem. ......10 (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (9/8/2015 1:06:00 PM)

    Life is a combination of time and energy spent by us during three dramatic stages whereby we plan and execute things according to our wisdom. In the closing stages, we will be called upon to renounce every thing here and to march on to the world beyond. Thank you for such a wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/15/2015 11:25:00 AM)

    Thanks for lovely comment.

  • Ruby Mostazir (9/8/2015 1:05:00 PM)

    True..... Nice poem (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/15/2015 11:25:00 AM)

    Thanks much Ruby.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 8, 2015

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