Through Times Of Emptiness Poem by Peter S. Quinn

Through Times Of Emptiness

Rating: 5.0


Through times of emptiness and shadows
The day is coming in new life to give
Light against extinction in dim to live
Be of tomorrow in day breaking glows
Like yesterdays were revealing in try
Changing some destiny once and for all
Each in their own interpreting and call
Before they became existence gone by

Sometimes knocking with harasses
Fate with huddles of its meaninglessness
Nothing to feather and uphold dreaming
Interminable in age embarrasses -
Try then to grip to inner trust finesse
That comes through depression like gleaming

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shannon Wright 07 January 2008

I thought it was beautiful, a ten in my book. -shannon

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rachael richmond 07 January 2008

some phrases didn't make sense - it was as if you had translated them from a different language and that they had lost some of their meaning.... however, the overall 'feeling' was one of quiet optimism for the future, the end of a black tunnel.. ... ...rachael

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