Thundering Youth/Thundering flower
Like the thundering flower of youth,
and the thundering beauty of a flower
the thundering beauty of youth
and the thundering youth of power
Like the thundering power of truth,
The springtime was a crying flower
drenched in orchid's blood
and revealing all of its power
godblessamen
Heyy :) I really liked this poem. It was thought out, and very well written. You did a great job :) I also want to thank you for commenting on my poem. I didn't think it was too good but if someone else likes it, I guess it's okay. I'll be putting new ones up soon, so when you can, check them out: D
I actually like this poem... The springtime has a lot of promise and possibilities, just like the youth.. I hope I was able to interpret the poem correctly.. :)
unending search never unlashed the beauty of what is the truth....such a poem, where my heart thunder of beauty....thank you an d God bless for sharing... a 10 +++
great poem, you really have to read this over a few times before you understand the true meaning to it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very good. There is so much meaning in each symbol, and the flow is excellent. It all blends perfectly together to form a wonderful image and statement.