Errol Anderson

Rookie (Jamaica, but now live in Canada.)

Time If Only... - Poem by Errol Anderson

The quiet and calm beckons yet remains out of reach,
The wrong place, the wrong time… is timeless.
The mind still spins, like a top out of control,
Longing for that sweetness that was meant to please.
A passion waiting to be unleashed, tasting some but not fulfilled.
The senses remain electric, charged by the shock.
Emotions ablaze, the excitement and the pain, the mood sways.
There is no game but accept the loss.
The blame, where does it lay, time… if only it stood still.
Deception, was there just cause, to awaken that part which slept?
Acceptance with no regrets.
This weight hangs heavy, drowning, gasping for one last breath.
The tunnel, there a light, reaching…reaching.


Comments about Time If Only... by Errol Anderson

  • (5/7/2011 7:05:00 PM)


    I really liked this emotional rollercoaster in poetic deed.

    Fabulous work

    You nailed it
    to my cross.

    Smiling at you

    Tai
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  • (5/6/2011 1:18:00 PM)


    Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 9, 2011


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