Time Moves Away Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

Time Moves Away



The months walked by so fast
Tiptoeing through my days
Silently moving on in a steady pace
Taking me in a spin
Barely a year has passed
When father passed away last year
It was in November
A bitter month to remember
For all its sad memories
Now it's September
Just two months before November
To complete a year of his passing
How fast the time went
Weaving memories to carry along in its flight
As I walk through life
From day to day, from year to year as I live
Today as September walks in
I am reminded of many things
It reminds me that this year is almost over
That it's almost a year since father has passed on
And that it's the month of my brother's birthday
Life is a celebration of the comings and goings
As time moves away, as years passed away

Friday, September 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: november,celebration,september,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 May 2018

a favorite line: Tiptoeing through my days ...and: Today as September walks in i'd like to see punctuation, but so far i'm NOT having the trouble i sometimes have trying to figure out where some poets are ending and beginning sentences. ;) i like the poem, but the last line would sound better, , , , [to me anyway! ].....if you kept the same verb tense i.e. by using either moves/passes OR moved/passed. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 September 2017

I am sorry that your father has passed away last November. May God bless his soul to live in peace. I am further pleased that the birthday of your brother is on same month.Time is unsteady. You have nicely inscribed here.... Life is a celebration of the comings and goings As time moves away, as years passed away It is a beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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