'Time Tells Time' 2 Of 2 Of The Original Poem by Almedia Knight-Oliver

'Time Tells Time' 2 Of 2 Of The Original

Rating: 5.0


Your mirror is telling you that you’re a beautiful…
Listen to it, not like me, who tried not to hear
It reflects a face as fresh as a recently cut rose

Do not look for wrinkles
Admire the shining stars
Do ponder past moons, then
Anticipate all moons ahead


My dear, distance before is not far back…
So near you can smell sweet- cut summer grass,
Laugh at your children ringing around roses,
and help fill their pockets with poses

Fall trees in back yard stand barren
Just you stand tall to bear all
Just keep in mind the golden rule
Your golden years will happen

Dear daughter, waste not time on bygones
Just make right that you think went wrong


(Dedicated to my daughter Heather L. Knight:
A juxtaposition of the original: Times Tells Time)


Almedia S Knight (ASK)
September 22,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wow! Mom is great … ‘Anticipate all moons ahead’ and it’s Full Moon with shining smiles…to make us smiling… Looking back is folly and looking ahead is forte …nice diction 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Pranab K Chakraborty 02 May 2010

FALL TREES IN BACK YARD STAND BARREN JUST YOU STAND TALL TO BEAR ALL........... Long.... Long play with your poetic radiation which much more powerful than the stags of nuclear bomb. with regards, Apoet Bangla.

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