Four Stages Of Life Poem by Almedia Knight-Oliver

Four Stages Of Life

Rating: 4.9


She with child waged a fight
But baby won outright

Then she struggled with self
Innocence and lighthearted left

Later, she struggled with her mind
But, couldn’t gain entry into the mine

Now, the battle with life begins...
If you're wondering…the grim reaper wins.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Steven S 25 August 2009

I love this one...not too crazy about the outcome though.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 August 2009

Custodian lost at the seam of vain.In vain she did cried.

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beautiful poem so wisely said..loved it

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2009

wonderful realistical poem, a real philosophy, lovely to read...............

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Angelic Warrior 31 August 2009

brilliant! .....too true, its impossible for you to cheat death....its always there at the end.....great write!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 January 2010

It’s the contentment of Great Motherhood… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Claude H Oliver Ii 28 November 2009

Always, the grim reaper stands by.

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Prakash Mehra 13 October 2009

Experience speaks. You have narrated it too perfectly.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2009

She with child waged a fight But baby won outright Then she struggled with self Innocence and lighthearted left lovely, meaningful and praie worth bcse of its message....10 read mine beauty

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Words of wisdom here with this one Almedia......life is not easy and when reality sets in your poem gives the outcome. 10 love Karin

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