Time To Bask In Sun Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Time To Bask In Sun

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If seed-time to sow time is to learn,
And harvest time for laurels to earn,
Comes winter when with cold,
Silvery sun from gold,
It's time to enjoy soft hues of sun,
Basking in smiling sun,
Deserving a heaven,
Truism is it from the times old.
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Musings |07.11.2017|

Monday, February 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: harvest,sun,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Seed-time, time to sow, is the time to learn; and harvest time, to earn. This little Limerick is a take-off from this truism.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 February 2019

A great limerick with a meaningful message. Wonderful lines throughout this write that imparts wisdom.

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 February 2019

Thank you Rose Marie, I find that Limericks have a great potential for further treatment. But the common perception is that they are slap-stick, or rather bawdy. In Sanskrit there are quatrains called Subhashitas. I have done a free translation of many of them into Limerick format. I find them a very useful tool.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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