‘Isn't it time for me to leave? '
someone asks me from inside,
‘the choice is not mine',
I'd answer the voice inside.
But if you ask my choice,
‘the sun is leaning west,
the best time has come'
I would not hesitate.
‘the choice is not mine', Deeply powerful! .. Deeply heart touching! ..
There is a knock on my door… it's time to leave…
This is wonderful and optimistic, embracing life and respecting the natural cycle of things coming and going, through embracing its end. Thank you for for sharing 5/5: -)
ADDITION: I cannot tell whether the time has come or not, according to my belief, it is God who decides. This poem lets behind a great personal question. Rereading this precious poem is most important.
Beautiful poem asking the reader his/her serious opinion. Love to read the poem, love to think about the subject, just loveliest worded. TOP Marks 5 Stars 10 points!
Thank you, Sylvia. You have taken time to read the poem thoroughly and share with profound understanding. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! .. (Brilliantly) ! .. Written! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++