(I know the following poem is really big, but I hope you enjoy the story)
Timu and Tigi were friends,
they lived at different ends,
even then the relation never descends,
talk and tease, all there without amends.
charm of the two was comparable to none,
many tried but no one was able to outdone,
they were diverse & infinite & always having fun,
but it lasted only till her heart wasn't won.
one day Tigi told Timu abt a boy with name Reejay,
she thought of him as the best all the way,
Timu knew he was just fooling Tigi away,
and he reckon Reejay was a big liar and jerk till today.
Timu told her all the things he knew,
dubious was her decision about the relation to pursue,
at times she wished Timu sayings to be untrue,
her mind is in perplexity for having what she want to.
Tigi was in no mind, she went to Reejay,
wished he was the same way person which he portray,
she only received was truth- unreliable and dismay,
their relationship was now a complete disarray.
she was bit shattered and was in lot confusion,
so decided to have a winter vacation,
she knew it wont be anythin full of sensation,
but felt it would atleast bring some elation.
no matter how much Timu she trust,
love of Reejay in her life seemed to be a must,
made up her mind to make blunt all the thrust,
make all doubts go away, misapprehension combust.
Reejay has to turn to good side, he has to be nice,
with this wish alone Tigi didnt put relation to cease,
but she wasnt sure how realy to deal with the vice,
but then came up the friend Timu with some gr8 advice.
T&T started executing planned stuff,
somthing were true & some were bluff,
wasnt easy, the whole thing was tough,
road to goodness was twisted & rough.
Atlast! ! Reejay was now decent & demure,
persona so good that it made many lure,
the statements he now makes seem to endure,
this was Timu's efforts and TIgi's dream for sure.
Finally the day came when their bond was being knot,
in a church, Timu was in 2nd pew with the gift he brought,
Tigi walking up to the center was thrilled a lot,
it was all perfect until in Tigi's sight Timu was spot.
That few second of eyes stick silenced all around
she felt as if TImu look through her in abound,
He suddenly felt what she meant, both were drown,
both had feelings of jumble, heart made unknown sound.
Then the father started exchange of vows for the wedlock,
asked Tigi to follow his words as Timu stopped his walk,
'I Tigi, take thee Timu, to be my husband...' all shock! !
Timu & Reejay couldnt believe... what did Tigi talk?
Tigi turned and took things out of blur, feelings put more clear,
both Silently were in love, unknowingly became the most dear,
Reejay was puzzled, thought he deserved for being insane earlier,
Timu & Tigi always adhere, started it all with a happiness tear.
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Dhanesh Aradhye
(17May2009)
A lovely poem that I enjoyed reading very much - it has the rythmn and qualities of an old fashioned ballad or a fairy tale - good writes: -)
very nice job yar in the tender age it is really appreciatable thanks,10+
vow vow vow....so touching yaar! ! ! great & an awesome job, bro... u just rocked at it....wondeful....no more words now! ! ! :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a lovely tale of two timu and reejay wowwwww -good read -10 anjali