Most Memorable Evening Poem by Dhanesh (trying to be) poet

when i reached her place, eager to see her face,
as i was fastening my fingers through my hair,
i felt scintillated, my god! ! ! today her charm was so so so fair,
& my heart started singing.....

on the highway, on a pulsar, streaming through the cool zephyr,
as i was trying to make the black way sweep over,
i was goggled eyeing the v shape flocks flying over.
& my heart was singing.....

while flowing here & there, the breeze was playing with our hair,
as we were watching sun as it lowered its burn,
and the green leaves & not-so green leaves giving a run,
& my heart was singing n singing......

then we halted, to let our eyes picture the blue water salted,
as we were sketching the world in the clouds white & browned,
the two singing hearts seem getting closer & separation got outdistanced,
my heart still singing, her heart must be singing! ! !

finally we saw the sky getting dark with vermillion color,
and our affinity blossom as kinhsip flower,
as we reached from where we started together,
my heart stopped singing.... my heart now didnt sing.

-
Dhanesh Aradhye
(20 nov 2008)
I hv removed all cApS in this now.. on my very dear readers' comments.
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